Wednesday, 12 June 2013

NIE Story (TimTim's Adventure) By Alvin Liow(group leader)

There is a boy name TimTim who has the ability to be unseen to the naked eye. We do not know how he got that power but i bet it will be crazy to think about it. TimTim's best friend is Jack, he is a loyal friend to TimTim ever since when they just back kindergarten. He is alway being bully by three bullies name Boston, Zack and Drake. Boston is the biggest in the group who goes to gym almost everyday just to build up his muscle but not the brain. Zack and Drake are Boston's comrade. Zack is a small guy but loves to play prank on people while Drake is good with words.
       One day, when TimTim and Jack were eating in the school cafeteria. The bullies came over and took our food and money. TimTim can not do anything because the power is not known by anyone. The bullies also beaten them in the face and there were no one wanted to help because they are scare. Even the prefect are scare of them.
       TimTim wanted to take revenge for his friend, Jack and also want them to stop bullying. So the next day, TimTim uses his ability to become a ghost that beat them from no where.
       First of all, he punch Boston in the face. Zack and drake were laughing at him because he shouted for nothing. TimTim smack Zack in the buttocks and another punch to Drake's face. They were not scare and there try to use a bucket of water to review him. TimTim did not realise and was pour with water and his invisibility runs off. The whole school saw him and he was shock!..........What's next?

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